【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 i8 O( T! N( ?' T6 P2 A1 Q歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" j9 J8 p& D8 E, H! V1 F4 d: PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 z  |" _2 C/ w1 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 R$ W( |- C2 _# `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% Y4 Q$ C/ t8 p. Z0 uI really want to know just how much you love me
' w2 a5 `  {: G9 q7 `3 II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# m+ n; J0 K8 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( L4 ~  z+ U$ u) L0 q) uI want so much to see inside your heart
* I6 b4 g6 K' w( N" rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 A& y; n0 Z; j2 Y4 cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" a( O) \5 r9 K/ KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) E' u0 }/ P. j& U; g! K2 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" F1 V; u0 E2 E. dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( w5 K# B/ i; J& W' I<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% Q+ r2 x& H, {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; @1 O+ N- o0 s5 ^5 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 g/ ^7 Q3 f& v  D8 X* F- @" t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 z; s. h! ~, V: L4 _5 i3 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" q( c+ a+ ^5 d' B7 }7 B1 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* V) t+ t1 @  n- v8 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; Q7 m9 z' f& y" M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  s6 K2 S' n3 r2 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- K5 T  M" g8 O( }, S2 i* E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) [4 H5 d: q6 E' Z% h<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 w$ W/ o8 i7 w$ P+ u% p/ v% D& k0 s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' N# p/ L0 D! F0 Z9 E; Q. _: O, d4 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, [* e+ z$ O3 Z; @1 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' }: g* _( d% }7 e3 f& M" ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 U1 f; |# P" k4 }1 t$ m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 E; z: g! B) h3 }& ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 f) X' s; \+ a# O) v% a1 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 O* P- y* N) Q4 p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ H5 C6 j0 \/ ^4 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 V( K9 M) Z- a# ?$ j( w2 g/ H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 x. w2 y8 T1 F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ U- q" S/ r: w1 t$ P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; g9 h1 X! ]& ]7 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ z% l& K7 D  x7 U  Y: u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 ?- ?1 ^  p3 f$ ?9 S. b% R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 g/ P5 B8 w' P3 F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" n& ?3 ?" {7 `: A3 i- G: C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) ]# \6 X( M. l2 I1 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  u1 U" o2 F6 V# H, F2 @% G3 ~/ x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( Y  F) A/ E0 i" h/ J( L$ O& I; h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. N7 T! A, u2 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 t! F" |4 K: C5 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 n/ Z% H* d) k% L; x. z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>