【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) i5 h0 }0 t" S8 T) w5 Q歌词我附在后面。
# X9 d$ P8 h: s* sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 x' ^+ t9 L' V% F% \6 v3 HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; b  g3 C( d' l, X0 G/ |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: w0 P9 B( }* [6 YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* z0 G/ f8 s1 f  V9 _# v0 B; GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; D/ j: {" G$ ?# J1 ?$ W) K% s$ g) ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; |7 i+ h! K- D  H9 pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. s2 D( J' C3 T" ^0 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 a/ R4 a6 L& m% W) K' CI want so much to see inside your heart
% B/ n' M/ Y: e( Z# p8 a* i  z. |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) X. U! E; \0 j8 y2 xI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 }5 O; L$ e# |9 E* s3 }: q5 Z9 hI regret not dying
& ~* A# P/ y/ M5 [" X4 U9 OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( `' G1 _8 W. R0 C2 g0 B8 }/ RWith such a tongue as yours,
1 P' O9 W/ ?3 jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% K/ Q( \8 ~4 K: ~+ X! f( L" x; x# QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 j$ |! k1 _" m8 l# _7 X4 u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 H( }0 V: k  Z: w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' M/ t& J1 s1 A: C+ M& G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. S% ?( r0 `5 a  F# ?6 M+ {3 y) E" w0 s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 @2 Y" L9 e7 k4 W" X: ?, R/ y& c0 k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 K0 L0 T% D. y- F" g+ X8 [, N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" b" B( N9 `' @4 k3 H7 i! |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 K* I3 X* |0 R7 u' D( U<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 k1 T. B, p# T, F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) r3 U2 D' ]+ A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) L: S) t4 Q1 R3 ]3 s) H, ]- h$ }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 x6 E3 R+ Z4 v/ M. u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: D5 |  }/ |' r, s+ H0 [' S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ T" p  E4 W1 w) P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: J( z6 f0 }" r, Y) Q4 W* `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 w2 n1 t) |6 V9 Z5 s6 R) U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) X% y0 p" e/ t1 L) Q, z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: f; l4 \$ I/ u; N1 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& m% i/ A0 N3 e( \" T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ @  |/ Y3 z+ o2 L8 e' G: Q1 u  h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( J" k4 X! c) X2 ^. W我请你剖开它

) v0 T( N2 O8 J/ l# h9 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 i! f6 j0 F, O1 m0 p; s& g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>