【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
* N+ t- ^' S! N' gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" }; [% P9 |& T+ _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: v$ W3 V$ X: I3 q& @0 |From the first moment we met,
. H( p8 d/ c7 C& y4 u' H% KI already loved you with all my heart
& R7 Z4 w& Y# T; ]  F' ]" bWe meet and talk everyday,
; R0 N$ k/ g7 S+ O9 B& CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) P& r+ h1 |- b2 m/ Q2 g4 a( \; yI would probably know how you feel
; ^, Z6 j9 Y7 PLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 d& G7 s" E0 g% F* s+ \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" `( I5 E, t' t" E( s/ M8 xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 g5 B; \0 t: U- }* vEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
5 y$ P% k! }* O% S  q- E/ oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  Y) K# H- L6 N) L" Z. |8 U2 n/ yBut I never did
4 z1 g9 Z/ d/ V- I, W. V& tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 ^) z) j# j6 |* ?: s, |If today isn’t too late,
9 R) Q# }% \, nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# G' v8 u$ M. [* t1 v; y; E; O& mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% {7 O" w$ h/ X5 U& _( o+ oEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 n% j2 ^: d8 R# pEntrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 j! `" c6 ~( w3 J# L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ v+ u# j4 k$ V<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  Z7 {2 G  L+ y" U& t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 ?- A4 s; i: S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 H+ G( U4 p. m" O& q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# O# N7 s9 c9 B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# C: \: Y) d; z9 ~" Q1 A, |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) _9 i7 Y, \) s0 @# O, z" I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 y3 _2 @& f6 C. Y- P" _) n  z- \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 z0 p# Q1 ]7 D9 Z9 S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 m0 ]: Y; O) v<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) C4 y& q. V7 F- \, g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ n9 U  Z4 B3 V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 x2 j' @4 E* D# q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 @. Q9 y2 c1 x6 m& u6 T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, Y0 J% u+ w: f& d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ M1 I( x9 k$ U7 ?<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" r5 q7 @) T3 A5 Z+ Z2 p& J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! i  t" L9 T. j* B% l# ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" i, i( R6 ?7 w! e: W" Y" @<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 @* X/ M" I% Q; m) O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  g+ O- f9 @0 C( f' e% h7 Q6 D<P>But I never did </P>
* w, t5 G, f2 o" N& L+ S<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 j, Q4 H/ r. s* z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 X# w5 @( i$ w7 L* Q" u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# `4 Q* Z% \  ]" W0 k: ]$ u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& ~6 y3 x: o2 [) L+ I( j2 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 |) }! n6 D# x4 I/ ^2 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 ~3 U) C2 W+ ^, v' j8 l/ y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( ?. b2 x$ ^7 Z8 G4 s7 v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 Q7 l1 X6 l+ f) \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>