【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" H; \9 D9 t7 {  l歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 f% s$ M% h6 S/ {. ?The sky is happy down to its soul
+ ]; q( M1 t/ yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, H* ?2 N+ Q* EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 c' V4 C! A+ E9 ]0 m, gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ o  E$ V/ C% u( X+ v% d, c+ yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) x2 A& u; R, f& D' II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' K4 T& X0 D' `0 N+ U8 _/ aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; K# U6 d/ A) O2 d& AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 _6 M9 e$ L2 B9 l& \1 Z; Y0 y) RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, a" I3 `- F5 B/ ~6 f- h4 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: O" O$ l2 [! E# d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 M5 ?4 u4 \! e; c) E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 O9 v0 n$ M  k3 a- F: {% P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: g6 ~* v$ N5 l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) x6 P  W; t2 K4 B2 r  V. t) H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 b# F/ i7 f3 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 v* E) c. S. `0 y6 c2 f& y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) p$ K) h5 \8 Q( @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! D* [5 a6 Y! p; g$ ]( S7 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" v' |# O3 V. l8 {) I<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' k9 P" L# g% u% ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 m) `, `& B+ c' X  G# J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 ~( y9 v2 R5 i; z; S5 |4 M# k/ @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 ~% o# U2 x$ P; n: i7 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' f# v4 q5 S' U: p1 I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 H8 C* z* K" ~2 ]1 {/ ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% B, }& C& W! o! U8 B  N7 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 E/ ?& a8 R1 k4 U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( i. B' J9 m$ R+ t8 C6 ^" Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! M; p/ H+ M- N: M/ n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- O# W+ z$ A; b1 E: M% X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 r" F1 W6 W0 j2 x7 G& L% L<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 @. m$ J, m  S! o8 h$ j; f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ o9 x* m1 `) ~; t6 Z: c# l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; N" g/ e9 r& t' l! N' w" m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ V: c, }5 e$ x) a; V; Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 M6 J+ e; X: s0 L6 F" w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- m6 V; r9 f! K, C/ ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 {, V9 g& J5 D& r( k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" g/ a: D5 ~8 C; \: t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ G& b+ K5 N; l& C6 n; C+ o我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, [* r& X6 N2 W' \# C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>