【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ m0 Z! n+ v4 HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' }1 L# C% d1 L1 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! g0 p3 p0 ^- X6 P$ A) d9 W( _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 P6 }' q0 `* v  R( ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  c; M; g; {; M- ~; ~% `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  H/ F) c1 |2 KI love you I love you with all my heart
& n! L. g! u, a8 p$ \1 hNothing can compare to my love
) p7 e, G& L  q" A$ k. g5 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, Y6 n4 m+ C4 a9 _+ S' a" Y( G4 NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 `3 q+ l2 k' a( t7 ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 r" @( i$ I. t1 d0 u$ c/ fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( K# P: d  Q4 G/ l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 [. X# X/ D/ g: t1 b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. }: q0 U% V( f& D0 a. {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 e; G7 s, I* \$ N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ t0 Z. R8 j: P; c2 Z- W) P3 J: H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& q3 R# I1 c+ t; d. w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 K2 o* W& W) c8 \- t<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 e3 ]0 j! [  L+ j$ `6 d' E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* ~/ r0 ^# T0 M* Y8 R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! P3 @" o" Z9 H- [( M# j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. C$ P) p6 x0 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: J. D) @6 {4 ]$ O& K) g1 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- t% n! n7 `' D+ M3 P+ B8 P7 z: H8 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 s  D5 W! |) L' J  d: N2 F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. r, T$ T7 `+ M4 F# x' Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- h5 ?4 v" c6 _0 C2 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, W; w* Z0 @4 P% H( m0 i0 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 [- n: a, [4 s2 A: y! p& |( w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; d6 R2 V  y+ f/ ?2 ^8 |5 T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 d1 |# k8 ~" C* c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) O( o3 d! m! g% P- B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! h0 Q- y, w$ p1 B" C2 U/ g# T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 b) `4 b3 H' M4 i( O  w/ R9 x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) \) c* b) ^8 ~/ i6 @/ }! s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>