【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; E! `' ~+ d  b2 ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, W2 ]( O, c4 G8 O% CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) F1 u- _! v3 Y8 I' ^9 V7 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" e5 M& z, v7 b$ i' l5 X; sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 v& r7 o7 w, a0 l  cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 S6 C. U7 \( w4 LYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ n  n9 Z6 J) F; N$ BEvery other word you utter is love
& i4 v7 Y/ G1 K; A' |1 ^2 F1 `I really want to know just how much you love me
% h, E8 X6 U7 ?, a. oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 m* N; b9 @) O2 ~( Q9 ?( ^# NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& o+ X1 R8 A# ~8 s3 `$ ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: i2 {) M9 A; g4 J# d" \5 }/ e0 xWith such a tongue as yours,
0 K* N* n, }* \0 W6 E! v( q4 o4 bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% J  Q1 L" s  fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ O9 d% l: l( y$ Z4 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; D; e' a0 k$ e- |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 _2 ^, X& ^* Q  u5 l! n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" H7 b( X6 F5 O! m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 O5 J# V  R4 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 t: [) ]2 ]3 u* E9 O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  w1 J, y* _- {! F$ |7 W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 v0 B; G* V- V: M) X- x, h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, `; O! @0 G9 S* n9 Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, X  K0 n9 i+ G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' P  p# l3 v3 {) @7 v; |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* @6 i* @5 f1 O  F. l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# A& M: K) r2 }" |6 M( b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! M4 I  o% ~6 I5 k1 d0 X0 e, p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 }4 z- l" R$ P+ P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 f: y  v) U. F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ ~0 k7 Y  D+ N* U" `3 s+ p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( l* u$ n4 R1 L+ c1 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: _. d9 g' V, C. u% r9 Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ u+ m) U0 v- s$ z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. k+ R! U( n6 S' i! T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. x2 n/ I& j1 @" k4 {# N! A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 M; Y8 z8 ]6 n/ r+ M3 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>