【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  c, e$ [( W" hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 j6 f4 [& b" _; F3 w7 I0 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: Q8 A0 L8 V! D3 @  z  tThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 K+ A+ a9 Z* ^With the moon kissing it every night
* @2 n3 m8 _9 t! z" |' vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 ?4 O" X8 s% M# I) pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" Y2 j2 X# l5 ]: U& wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ z! {# g) O' x: O6 G) ~, eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, E) a( ]/ q  W% HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' ]& C1 h2 S) j; OI’m still filled with fear
/ E3 k8 @" Q+ H+ \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& L7 U+ y& N4 d' wI regret not dying
9 q" _) R0 P. J4 X: u  |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 E, t% x; C' G" V- S8 UWith such a tongue as yours,
* h& V$ s1 O' q3 O0 |) HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) B( J7 {9 G6 _( EIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 u! ]* [$ K' Z2 E% J5 l* \! CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! K6 z0 T/ _, N* S' A7 ^( ]' {) [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" D6 W+ r8 h+ S( G9 f+ k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 x( L& V* I. R8 r8 F; g6 o9 H1 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. ]2 f2 P8 Y& j8 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& ?% s; H& ^: ]" F" o% e! i& u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 q2 w; `- j4 B( w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 Z5 d* l; e5 C. u$ F/ S( |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 [- L+ i- T' C7 j: k% z7 M, |) o# p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; c. H" O/ o6 G. |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# h4 N/ S: K/ a6 O7 Z9 y9 L: [0 I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 _; O8 x: A, o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 {( ^4 b6 g! N- W; n, J3 I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 T# P7 c! ?4 M9 ^: x6 E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  K1 Y; k( h$ R' X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( @" c1 p7 H* s* j0 i9 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ e  D/ T  @' G) M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 Y. g, \1 I9 K, N  |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, d$ J+ H3 O5 M1 |  Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 v: J, R% x8 B) E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! X: F, f; C) L1 L2 D& H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! s& `$ v2 J2 R9 O5 ]4 x1 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: c$ n7 b3 }; g& p/ Q3 \8 G) N0 w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" s; a; Z# j1 [; j- B8 o: b8 D; \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- _# a0 l. V3 n3 B9 O! f' M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& H. y. ?4 V' i5 T9 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" X4 j/ O* R8 P  H) B& R我请你剖开它

" E, C' [  Z. G1 r2 _8 [7 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 d, l/ @8 l" P0 l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>