【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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4 b* `8 Y# b9 \( i8 w, M' k我另将歌词附在此。
# u; q- K; J: cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# k% W5 Q5 H$ z8 t! t' b5 K! ]From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: N# a5 w% ?2 f) B1 c8 DBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  j. y2 c6 y& l, u; K/ j* bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
3 A: s+ f3 h+ N% p7 R# g: p8 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
. W$ A7 }1 _/ D3 e# rI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 E4 a# H& @4 l3 ~3 X- yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ j. f0 Q6 n8 W3 B, x! sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 W4 _; s( R' t% yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 k) y! x) b+ K1 Y/ [% Q, eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 a+ V( ~, l' E% r3 o& lEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 M; c: v% Z1 qEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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$ M0 U6 \6 ^) D& C9 ^+ W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ A9 B$ G* K  j: b$ e0 ^+ H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 C8 l- H+ A7 r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 ~; ~: V# y  g1 U* |' B% j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 v% }4 [" Q4 ?& W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& B; p! d1 H' U4 P* V: X2 S1 d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 E  S" i2 r, s6 T* o# ?; H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* V$ d: Q, D! |5 N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 p* N) R+ Z5 ]2 M. M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: z( |( N/ v0 D' W<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 F. o9 T3 Z5 L, t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! y; C7 U1 N0 y) C2 }/ W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 y/ E, }6 i: h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& J7 J2 L' z/ m% i" w" N! E2 B; x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; V/ y) Z' d6 B5 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# L8 n1 T) C+ R) t* C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 s2 f2 H7 v# c0 L6 L( T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 g, q  L: P. g, }: A! E! i5 e2 }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" s) v6 R9 ?6 w7 V<P>But I never did </P>
8 H# a* {+ [' P* I. a<P>但我不会 </P>
3 u2 q5 D7 x' R7 K6 w/ z, y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* K% X# V+ Y4 @3 P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* B" l& i3 F' j9 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# q  H& k2 ?! ~3 S8 |. X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 Y' v8 F, q8 H' n. Q6 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 K; S5 a7 R6 `8 O5 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& K9 @, H$ r- P4 x8 J; p<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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4 ]( Z/ m; D# E1 d+ o9 e4 O6 ]/ ]<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 V& V" n( \* Q- `, u( t3 ]<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>